#amwriting: Evoking Atmosphere and Place

Reblogging this great article on evoking atmosphere in your writing. This is something I need to work on myself, particularly my tendency to ‘tell’ rather than ‘show’. Love the examples used in the article as well. ~ Flynn

Life in the Realm of Fantasy

Several indie books I’ve read lately impressed me with the sense of atmosphere the author managed to pack into their work, and the sense of place.

a girl called wolfThe book I am currently reading  is a contemporary novel,  “A Girl Called Wolf” by Stephen Swartz. In the opening chapters, Swartz’s Greenland has a harsh, ethereal quality. The environment is shown as unearthly, beautiful, and deadly, as are the people. The story of his protagonist Anuka (later called Anna) and her early life stands out sharply against the nearly cinematic backdrop, yet Swartz shows it with an economy of words.

Later, when Anuka is forcibly taken to civilization, that village and its poverty, as compared to her prior life, is clear in the reader’s head. It is seen through her eyes, although the villagers themselves don’t see themselves as poor in comparison–just the opposite. Swartz manages to get that across without overstating…

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Writing Advice – Articles to Help You Hone Your Craft

Here are some of the best writing articles that have crossed my WordPress and social media feeds this week, gathered in one place for your convenience. Enjoy and happy writing 🙂

How to Deepen Your Worldbuilding by Cecilia Lewis

“Setting and worldbuilding are critical aspects of your novel. Having a vivid setting can pull readers into your story and bring it to life, and unique worldbuilding is often what sets a book apart.”

Read Here: http://ryanlanz.com/2016/02/04/how-to-deepen-your-worldbuilding/

Being God 101 – The Basics of Worldbuilding by Alex Limberg

“Admit it, you want to be a god.

You despotic, power-hungry person, you need your own little space where everybody (and everything) bends to your rules, and you need to get your way.

Why else would you write fiction?

Ok, maybe you have other, more noble motives as well. Nevermind, sorry for prematurely accusing you (maybe).”

Read the Full Article: https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2016/02/01/being-god-101-the-basics-of-world-building/

20 Tips for Writing a Captivating Short Story Part 1 by Mindy Halleck

“Today, as I edit, trim, cut, and otherwise obliterate a short story I wrote that ended up to be 8,000 words, but needs to be 5,000 words, I am reminded of this quote:

“Not that the story need be long, but it will take a long while to make it short.” -Henry David Thoreau”

Read More Here: http://ryanlanz.com/2016/01/29/20-tips-for-writing-a-captivating-short-story-part-1/

20 Tips for Writing a Captivating Short Story Part 2 by Mindy Halleck

“Continued from Part 1”

Read Here: http://ryanlanz.com/2016/02/01/20-tips-for-writing-a-captivating-short-story-part-2/

 
Via K M Weiland http://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/resources/infographics/

Building an Unforgettable Character by Kris Noel

“Character building is one of my favorite parts of writing a novel. I love seeing where they’re going to take me and where their journey is going to end up. Even though I plot extensively before starting a new novel, I always leave room for the characters to lead me somewhere new.”

Read Here: http://krisnoel.com/post/138754008929/building-an-unforgettable-character

Character Development and Plot Structure Guest Post by Michael Dellert

“Compelling fiction is about what your character wants, how your character goes about getting that thing, and what your character does when she/he realizes that what they want is entirely different from what they need.”

Read More: http://danalatorre.com/2016/02/05/character-development-and-plot-structure-guest-post-by-author-michael-dellert/

Anatomy of an Action Scene – The Advantages of Present Tense by Bart Bishop

“Action is hard to write. What works so well on the screen, with the full visceral impact of celluloid, can appear rote and stagnant on the page. Imagine a sword fight in prose. Do you describe every parry and thrust? And if so, at what point does it devolve into the equivalent of a VCR user manual?”

Read Here: https://litreactor.com/columns/anatomy-of-an-action-scene-the-advantages-of-present-tense

 

Via K M Weiland http://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/resources/infographics/


How to take the Guesswork out of what Scenes to put in Your First Act by K M Weiland

“Writing the First Act in a story used to terrify me. It felt like walking a tightrope. Blindfolded. In the dark.”

Read the Full Article: https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/how-to-take-the-guesswork-out-of-what-scenes-to-put-in-your-first-act/

Writing Tip: What’s The Rush by David Farland

“I see a lot of trends in today’s literature. Perhaps the biggest one is that every writer seems to be in a rush. Many new writers try to keep the pacing blazing hot. They’ve heard that in today’s world, kids are trained to think in “sound bites,” and anything longer than a television commercial bores them.

As a result, writers try to keep their description stark, the narration nonexistent, and the action heavy. They write rapid-fire dialog.

Unfortunately, their stories become a blur. They never really come alive.”

Read More: http://davidfarland.tumblr.com/post/138555499640/writing-tip-whats-the-rush

7 Choices That Affect A Writer’s Style by Amanda Patterson

“Style, in its broadest sense, is a specific way in which we create, perform, or do something. Style in literature is the way an author uses words to tell a story.”

Read Here: http://writerswrite.co.za/what-is-your-literary-style

 

I hope you find these articles helpful. Wishing you all the best on your writing adventures. ~ Flynn

The Biggest Roadblocks to Finishing Your Novel + Some Useful Links

Can’t seem to finish that novel? Here a some of the roadblocks that might be hindering your progress, and what you can do about them.

 

The first draft: 

  •  Trying to edit as you write the first draft. This can easily result in an endless cycle of editing and re-editing, with the first draft never actually getting finished. Just remember that the first draft is supposed to be terrible, and to keep writing anyway. As Terry Pratchett said, the “first draft is just you telling yourself the story.” Hemingway noted that the “first draft of anything is shit”, and Joyce Carol Oates advised that the “first sentence can’t be written until the final sentence is written.”

 
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  • Lack of planning. Prior to beginning you need some sense of where your story is going and how you’re going to get there, who your characters are, and how they are going to develop. Some lucky folks might be able to keep track of all of these things off the top of their head, but I need some kind of outline, even if it is just a few sentences describing the major plot points and character arcs. I usually do a complete scene-by-scene outline, though these will evolve as the story is actually written. Outlining does not limit your creativity, but helps you remain focused and keep track of the most important points in your story.
  • Losing the plot (in the literal sense). Even if you plan, it is possible to stray off on irrelevant tangents that lead nowhere, or get tangled up in a minor subplot that tries to take over the story. Take a break, remind yourself where you’re going, maybe backtrack a little if you have to, and get back on the right path.

  • Getting bored. Writing a novel can seem to take forever, which is another reason why it is important to get the first draft down as quickly as possible without worrying about editing.
  • Self-doubt. As soon as I figure out the answer to this one, I’ll let you know 🙂 The best I can say for now is to just keep going, no matter what. You can always fix everything with editing (hopefully).


After the first draft is finished: 

  •  It’s time to edit – but you have no idea how. Fortunately there are plenty of articles full of advise out there for this one, and I’ve included a few links below.
  • Loss of interest/focus. After you’ve read through your novel 50 or so times checking for character arcs, plot consistency, spelling, grammar, style, formatting, etc., it is easy to start loathing the very sight of your manuscript, and hating everything about it. Put it away for a while, maybe work on a new project yourself, and/or send your manuscript to be read by a fresh set of eyes, such as a beta reader or professional editor.
  • Over-editing. Your manuscript will never be completely perfect. There is no such thing as the perfect novel, and the words we put on paper will never quite meet the vision we had in our heads. That’s okay. The important thing is knowing when your book is ready to be released into the wild, when it is the best it can be. If you wait for it to be completely perfect, you will be trapped in an endless cycle of editing and revising, and never finish.


Links to editing tips:

Your NaNo Novel Is a Hot Mess! How to Edit Your Book by K M Weiland via HelpingWritersBecomeAuthors.com: https://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/nano-novel-hot-mess-edit-book/

Self-Editing Basics: 10 Simple Ways to Edit Your Own Book by Blake Atwood via thewritelife.com: http://thewritelife.com/self-editing-basics/

How to Edit Your Book in 4 Steps by Mike Nappa via writersdigest.com: http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/there-are-no-rules/how-to-edit-your-book-in-4-steps

TOP SELF-EDITING TIPS FROM PROFESSIONAL REEDSY EDITORS by Ricardo Fayet via kobowritinglife.com: http://kobowritinglife.com/2015/12/07/top-self-editing-tips-from-professional-reedsy-editors/

Other Useful Links:

Your ISBN: Answers to Frequently Asked Questions by Steven Spatz via BookBaby.com: http://blog.bookbaby.com/2016/01/book-isbn-answers-to-frequently-asked-questions/

The 6-Part Process to Successfully Self-Publishing Your Book by K M Weiland via CulturedVultures.com: http://culturedvultures.com/6-part-process-successfully-self-publishing-book/

What Words To Avoid In Your  Writing by K Ross via ryanlanz.com: http://ryanlanz.com/2016/01/20/what-words-to-avoid-in-your-writing/

Why Writing Isn’t Enough—The Savvy Writer’s Guide to Success by Kristen Lamb via WarriorWriters.wordpress.com: https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2016/01/25/why-writing-isnt-enough-the-savvy-writers-guide-to-success/

The 100 Best Websites for Writers in 2016 by Marisol Dahl via thewritelife.com: http://thewritelife.com/100-best-websites-writers-2016/


Best of luck in your writing adventures, and have a great weekend.

 


Great Articles and Resources to Help You Improve Your Writing

Here is another great selection of articles and writing resources to help plan and improve your writing, with several dedicated specifically to writing great horror. There is also an article addressing the question of whether you should quit blogging – is blogging dead?

Articles on planning your writing and creating flexible outlines:

4 Ways to Plan Your Writing by Jacqui Murray

“Few people can sit down and start writing. Most of us hem and haw as we mentally walk through how to get from introduction to conclusion. It’s called ‘prewriting’ and everyone does it. What differs is the method–what best suits our communication style?”

Read the Full Post Here: https://worddreams.wordpress.com/2016/01/18/4-ways-to-plan-your-writing/


7 Steps to Creating a Flexible Outline for Any Story by K M Weiland via Writer’s Digest

“My experience has been that more often than not, those who swear they dislike outlines are thinking of them in the wrong ways. Outlines are not meant to trap you into preset ideas or sap your creativity before you start the first draft. Outlines are also definitely not meant to be lifeless Roman-numeral lists.”

View Here: http://www.writersdigest.com/online-editor/7-steps-to-creating-a-flexible-outline-for-any-story/

K M Weiland also provides a great list of resources on Helping Writers Become Authors:

“Today, I’m going to give you a whirlwind tour of the back-yard party that’s always going on here at Helping Writers Become Authors. Following are the top 10 goodies you may be missing out on.”

Find all the links here: http://www.helpingwritersbecomeauthors.com/10-writing-resources-youre-missing-out-on/

 

Infographic via K M Weiland’s Helping Writers Become Authors

A selection of guides by Carla Lee Suson, posted on Short Fiction Break, which focus on writing specific monsters and horror archetypes:

On Writing – Werewolves by Carla Lee Suson via Short Fiction Break

“Like the vampire archetype, the werebeast comes from ancient lore and spans across different cultures. Historically, werewolf stories dated back to 440 BC with tales of Herodotus and then later around 1 AD when Ovid talks about King Lycaeon angering Zeus who exacts his revenge by turning the monarch into a wolf. This story is also where the word lycanthropy comes from.”

Read Full Article Here: http://shortfictionbreak.com/2016/01/16/on-writing-werewolves/

On Writing – Zombies by Carla Lee Suson via Short Fiction Break

“Made popular in movies, the walking dead archetype is a more recent invention as compared to other popular characters. Ghost stories are ancient and vampire tales date back to the Middle Ages, if not older. However, the idea of zombies emerged in the 1800s, with the first mention of the word occurs in 1819 in a book on the history of Brazil.”

Read Here: http://shortfictionbreak.com/2016/01/09/on-writing-zombies/


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A series of articles on writing horror fiction by Michael Thomas-Knight at Parlor of Horror:

Horror Fiction Writer – Articles and Tips via Parlor of Horror

“During the past few years I’ve written several articles pertaining to writing fiction. The series of articles titled, “Do You Want to be a Horror Fiction Writer” deals with ideas, suggestions and tips for writing short story fiction.”

View the post containing all the links here: https://parlorofhorror.wordpress.com/2016/01/17/horror-fiction-writer-articles-and-tips/

 

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Should You Quit Blogging by Mary Jaksch via Write to Done 

“from all my years of experience, I can confidently say that blogging is alive and well!

In fact, if you have the right guidance, it’s now even more of an opportunity than it was a few years ago.”

View Here: http://writetodone.com/is-blogging-dead/

 

I hope you find these links helpful, and have a great week!

Articles to Improve Your Writing and Help Build Your Author Platform

Articles to Help Improve Your Writing:

One Word Leads to The Next: Unconventional Conjunctive Devices by Chuck Palahniuk via litreactor.com

“Obsessive-compulsive behavior or not, that’s how I think a well-written story should work:  Each word should trigger the next, there should be a rhythm that supports memory retrieval, and regular repeating phrases to act as the linking devices.”

Read the Article Here: https://litreactor.com/essays/chuck-palahniuk/one-word-leads-to-the-next/

 

How to Write a Great Fight Scene by Sarah via A Writer’s Path

“I’ve reviewed both my favorite and least favorite fight scenes in fiction and have made notes on what I believe either makes or breaks them. Below are 5 points that I believe to be key to constructing a great fight scene.”

Read Here: http://ryanlanz.com/2016/01/08/how-to-write-a-great-fight-scene/

 

The Keys to Great Writing by Dawn Field via blog.bookbaby.com

“The secret that accounts for all this diversity of writers, writing styles and books with high impact, is that it is as much what you do as what you don’t do. While there is no common definition of great, all great books have the common feature of lacking content that isn’t great. Great books do not contain “un-great” stuff.”

Read the Full Article: http://blog.bookbaby.com/2015/12/the-key-to-great-writing/

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Image via Grammarly.

Building an Author Platform and a Successful Blog:

Improve Your Writing Platform (or Author Platform) in 30 Days by Robert Lee Brewer via writersdigest.com

“Anyway, this post collects 30 days worth of platform-building tasks into one mega-resource for writers. Use it wisely; share it widely; and prepare to find more success than you ever thought possible.”

Read the full article: http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/there-are-no-rules/improve-your-writing-platform-author-platform

 

9 Tips on How to Build Raving Fans for Your Blog by Gary Dek via jeffbullas.com

“Having a loyal readership is key to achieving success as a blogger or online publisher. You may have the best blog in your niche or even the most useful posts, but what good are your efforts if you don’t have a steady stream of readers to appreciate your work?”

Read More: http://www.jeffbullas.stfi.re/2014/08/02/9-tips-on-how-to-build-raving-fans-for-your-blog/?sf=drlybk

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Image via http://www.cafepress.com/angrywriter

I hope you all find these links useful. Have a great weekend.

Writing Tips: Great Articles to Improve Your Writing

World Building:

HOW WRITERS CAN CREATE THEIR OWN GALAXIES FAR FAR AWAY By Drew Chial

“In honor of Star Wars: The Force Awakens I wanted to explore world building in fiction.”

Read Here: http://drewchialauthor.com/2015/12/14/how-writers-can-create-their-own-galaxies-far-far-away/

 

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Writing Action Scenes:

Writing Kick@$$ Action Scenes–Hook! Cross! T.K.O. By Alex Limberg guest posting on Kristen Lamb’s Warrior Writer’s Blog

“To mix things up a bit, Alex is assisting me through the holiday season. Also, his free ebook “44 Key Questions” to test your story will help you with creating intriguing stories. This time he puts on his action hat and shares a clever recipe to write your readers’ socks off with action scenes.”

Read Full Article Here: https://warriorwriters.wordpress.com/2015/12/14/writing-kick-action-scenes-hook-cross-t-k-o/

 

Improving the All Round Quality of Your Writing:

HOW TO WRITE A NOVEL THAT WILL ACTUALLY BE WORTHY OF PUBLISHING By Michael Christiano

“Since publishing a book is easier and more accessible than ever before, it’s important to know how to write a novel that’s worthy of being published.”

Read More: http://ryanlanz.com/2015/12/12/how-to-write-a-novel-that-will-actually-be-worthy-of-publishing/

 

The difference between being a reader and a writer. Via Writer’s Circle on FB.


Self-Editing Tips:

TOP SELF-EDITING TIPS FROM PROFESSIONAL REEDSY EDITORS By Ricardo Fayet

“Revision is the most important part of writing a novel —yup, we said it: the most important part. Getting ideas down on the page might be challenging, but learning to see your work objectively, consider how readers will experience your story, and write into an ever-shifting marketplace is a different kind of difficult.”

Read the Full Post Here: http://kobowritinglife.com/2015/12/07/top-self-editing-tips-from-professional-reedsy-editors/

 

On Novel Structure:

Structuring a novel: 7 vital elements via Now Novel

“Why is structuring a novel crucial?

It puts in place the footholds you need to reach the finish. There are so many different ways of approaching structure in a novel that it can seem overwhelming. Regardless of what method of creating a structure for your book you find easiest, there are seven essential elements that most successful novels have:”

Read Here: http://www.nownovel.com/blog/structuring-a-novel/

 


On Maintaining Discipline:

Daily Discipline for Writers – Keep After It By Carrie Lynn Lewis

“This is the fourth and final week of our Daily Discipline for Writers series. We’ve shared a lot of good information and tips on developing discipline in your daily writing. This week, we’ll tie it all together.”

Read More: http://www.indieplottwist.com/daily-discipline-for-writers-keep-after-it/

 

Story Writing Tips From the Greats:

28 Writing Tips for Writing Stories from Edgar Allan Poe, William Faulkner, Ernest Hemmingway, and F. Scott Fitzgerald By Josh Jones

“Most writers find their individual voice only after they sojourn through periods of imitation. Though it’s an excellent way to appropriate experimental techniques and move out of comfortable ruts, imitation can only take us so far. But more prescriptive guidelines from famous authors can offer ways to refine our individual styles and visions.”

Read More: http://www.openculture.com/2015/12/28-writings-tips-for-writing-stories-from-edgar-allan-poe-william-faulkner-ernest-hemingway-f-scott-fitzgerald.html